Update #3

What's this? Another animatic it seems! This is (hopefully) going to be the final animatic before I move on to animation. I applied every major criticism about the previous animatic to this one, and now I believe the film is 10 times better. There are still changes I want to make to it, but they're all so incredibly minor that I might as well just save them for the animation phase. Unless the feedback I get tomorrow in class is like, really bad, then this is it right here. We shall see! But for now...

See you next post,

Devin Grover